February 2, 2011 Subject:
Writing The Right Perversion.
Excellent gonzo editing! The use of Social Engineering media juxtaposed against itself is well constructed. It often provides its humor through its Seriousness. I doubt I will find a better made mashup that supports and encourages the content it was created to vilify so well.
suggestions to the editor.
Shorter is better on this one. You end up going in circles on this topic. The dialogue being used as if it were a loop is a good place to look for trim. Itruins the excellent natural flow of the narrative. You stop hearing what they are saying because your brain is making you take notice that the exact same words were just said, over and over again.
I think you could very easily cut at least 2 minutes out and it would be a better video for it.
March 25, 2009 Subject: